Wednesday, 13 April 2016

@Jorden: Deluxe Fantastic Voyage Art Of Draft Version


At the moment I have only done a new version of the storyboard and concept art of my environment and silhouettes together with the thumbnails drawing Art of so far. I have not done production art, orthography drawing but it is ongoing process.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Dinesh,

    I'm so sorry for the late response with feedback. It seems your blog completely slipped the net and I missed you altogether. So, apologies for such a long wait.

    In regards to the art book, I think it works best when it is simply thumbnails on white backgrounds. So overall, my biggest suggestion would be a push towards simplicity. I'd get rid of the pink pattern and enlarge those thumbnails so that we can see them clearer.

    Your next job is to find some nice font for your titles. See here



    Clean backgrounds, nice fonts, clear imagery. I'd recommend that you begin introducing some further type so that we have some text explaining what we are seeing. Helping the reader understand your process and the reasons for developing specific designs.

    These changes will help get the book in better shape. From there we can begin to discuss the actual layout of elements on Wednesday. Here's some inspiration which may provide useful...